FREE...........?????
I am enclosed in a castle of worries,
i feel stranded unlike the fairies.
There's no ray of light and no ray of hope,
because this castle is buried deep down under the slope.
I am the prisoner there having no right to say,
because whatever i say is looked upon and am slayed.
I AM SLAYED...YES I AM SLAYED...
Now that i'm free,
i'm able to spree.
I am not shut up in bars,
and am able to look up at the stars.
I have the utmost right to say,
and i do dare dismay.
I AM SLAYED...OH! YES I AM SLAYED...
I used to get scared of life after death,
but now i am actually living every breath.
I used to always fear the grave,
but now do feel really brave.
I used to be horrified of the devil,
but i've already seen a lot of evil.
Now i'm happy...am happy for sure because
I AM SLAYED...YES I AM SLAYED!!!
Well i regard this as my masterpiece cos this poem actually has a pun on practically every word...it is like dat bcoz c i say i am slayed on one hand and on the other i am saying dat i am free coz i am slayed.....how can a person feel free after death??? dats vat is confusing but i still love it......cos it's meaning lies deep down.....
well guys dont think im sad n stuff im just posting it cos i wanted 2 post 1 of ma poems n so thought of doing it so enjoiiiii.........
i feel stranded unlike the fairies.
There's no ray of light and no ray of hope,
because this castle is buried deep down under the slope.
I am the prisoner there having no right to say,
because whatever i say is looked upon and am slayed.
I AM SLAYED...YES I AM SLAYED...
Now that i'm free,
i'm able to spree.
I am not shut up in bars,
and am able to look up at the stars.
I have the utmost right to say,
and i do dare dismay.
I AM SLAYED...OH! YES I AM SLAYED...
I used to get scared of life after death,
but now i am actually living every breath.
I used to always fear the grave,
but now do feel really brave.
I used to be horrified of the devil,
but i've already seen a lot of evil.
Now i'm happy...am happy for sure because
I AM SLAYED...YES I AM SLAYED!!!
Well i regard this as my masterpiece cos this poem actually has a pun on practically every word...it is like dat bcoz c i say i am slayed on one hand and on the other i am saying dat i am free coz i am slayed.....how can a person feel free after death??? dats vat is confusing but i still love it......cos it's meaning lies deep down.....
well guys dont think im sad n stuff im just posting it cos i wanted 2 post 1 of ma poems n so thought of doing it so enjoiiiii.........
posted by sun at
4:55 AM
6 Comments:
hey sunn....seemz nice to read...but den i didnt really get it...omg...lolz...but den do sumday xplain da puns to me ok..actually da whole poem...newaz yallah keep ritin n keep postin...
mwahhhhhh.......
yea..
toooooog goooood.......
IM FREE .. FREEE
wow..
nice work
u shud keep ritin..
no probs..
tc
Mohit
eheheh.....thx guys.....meenal as ussual u never understand nothing....u bad bad gurll..
hehehe........
but i lowwie sana....:( muah....xplain naa yaar....well ur da creator so ur interpretationz n mine can b like totally criss cross so yeaa
laterz...;)
I remember the day u wrote tyht and called me and told me bout it..
so totally awesome...
Ur trapped in ur world of unhappiness and ur were slayed to death by "their" actions...
But death is relieving coz..u dun hav to suffer those issues anymore..
So..ur free..
beautifull..
hey sun..jus spoke to ya..tht was sooooo refreshing...
really hope i can meet u'll tom..
love u..
mwwaahhhzz..
u've told me this naa??
its amazing as i told u last time also... my writer sun babie...
keep writing n shining.. ehehehe..
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