.................THE ONE..................
well hi guys.....its been long since i rote nething so here is a poem since as usual i dont have nothing 2 rite bout......this is a poem about a female hoo is married but is dreaming bout her past love....so here goes....i hope u like it.........
I see the stars in the sky flickering and shining,
and feel like going up there and getting one for my darling...
A hope springs up in me and my spirits lift up,
but as i get ready someone shakes me up...
He is a someone who looks familiar,
and im sure that this feeling is truly clear...
I look in his eyes,which are filled with surprise...
He hugs me and examines every inch,
i stare at him and do not even flinch...
Cos he is someone whom i know very well,
i shut my eyes and see myself begin to dwell...
There he is standing in front of me,but this known unfamiliarity is killing me...
I know i love him and he knows it too,
and i suddenly start hoping that we never rue[repent,regret]...
Why this feeling inside me?i have got no clue...
but whatever it is,
feels too good to be true...
Then i suddenly remember,those eyes,that smile...
how could i just simply surrender?
He is my life, he is my soul,and without who i could never be a whole...
He is the one,and if it wouldn't be for him there would be none...
He is my better half,and i am his,
i don't understand then why this confusion and WHY THIS???
It all began when i was dreaming,dreaming about someone whom "I DID LOVE ONCE"...
that love was shattered,
and it left my world totally scattered...
I didn't have a clue,
and i didnt know what to do...
But then he came along and woke me up,
woke me up from my dream, my past......he just woke me up......
and now that i've figured everything out,
i know that i've married the gem of gems,
and i could never ever go wrong and he will never leave me spout[broken, in a hopeless condition]..................
I see the stars in the sky flickering and shining,
and feel like going up there and getting one for my darling...
A hope springs up in me and my spirits lift up,
but as i get ready someone shakes me up...
He is a someone who looks familiar,
and im sure that this feeling is truly clear...
I look in his eyes,which are filled with surprise...
He hugs me and examines every inch,
i stare at him and do not even flinch...
Cos he is someone whom i know very well,
i shut my eyes and see myself begin to dwell...
There he is standing in front of me,but this known unfamiliarity is killing me...
I know i love him and he knows it too,
and i suddenly start hoping that we never rue[repent,regret]...
Why this feeling inside me?i have got no clue...
but whatever it is,
feels too good to be true...
Then i suddenly remember,those eyes,that smile...
how could i just simply surrender?
He is my life, he is my soul,and without who i could never be a whole...
He is the one,and if it wouldn't be for him there would be none...
He is my better half,and i am his,
i don't understand then why this confusion and WHY THIS???
It all began when i was dreaming,dreaming about someone whom "I DID LOVE ONCE"...
that love was shattered,
and it left my world totally scattered...
I didn't have a clue,
and i didnt know what to do...
But then he came along and woke me up,
woke me up from my dream, my past......he just woke me up......
and now that i've figured everything out,
i know that i've married the gem of gems,
and i could never ever go wrong and he will never leave me spout[broken, in a hopeless condition]..................
posted by sun at
1:14 AM
7 Comments:
ahaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnn.......nice nice... fer once it ends happily rather dan da prev emo ones...though all of dem were goooodd but one more added to da list of well ritten poems...cheers...n mwahzz...
wow......meenal is alive???? now im assured.....hehhehhehe.......thx re fer da comments n all........
You should really try a different rhyme scheme, it seems like you're forcing sentences to rhyme.
But good effort nonetheless.
Cheers ;)
thx neveys dayaan.........i vasnt actually making it rhyme.....i ves basically trying 2 speak my mind out.....it started rhyming........ nothing else.......
haha..I thought u ahted readin poems written by others D? :)
Nice stuff hun..
but I wannna know wat inspired u to write a poem on such a topic.
lemem know..
muahh
Yeahh but I haven't browsed around the blogs in a while so here I am :P
fckin.. ! awesome !! isa gud... :D
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