......10 Things I hate about you......
I hate to see you smile with everyone,
I hate to see you seem carefree...
I hate to see you happy with someone,
i hate it because you should be with me...
I hate to see you put up a cheery face,
i hate it because there's sorrow at the base...
I hate to see you flirt around,
i hate because to my sorrow there's no bound...
I hate the pain you have given me,
I hate the rudeness you had spoken to me,
I hate the way you said you loved me,
I hate the way oyu ended it with me,
but at the end of it allllll.....
I HATE THE WAY YOU STILL LOVE ME.........
well this poem is also made by me the great ehhee;) it ves made on the 6th of september, 2005
and it was one of the first 2 poems that i had made....the other one was "IT HURTS"......that ill rite after some days but first u guys comment on dis one re......dont worry.....
I hate to see you seem carefree...
I hate to see you happy with someone,
i hate it because you should be with me...
I hate to see you put up a cheery face,
i hate it because there's sorrow at the base...
I hate to see you flirt around,
i hate because to my sorrow there's no bound...
I hate the pain you have given me,
I hate the rudeness you had spoken to me,
I hate the way you said you loved me,
I hate the way oyu ended it with me,
but at the end of it allllll.....
I HATE THE WAY YOU STILL LOVE ME.........
well this poem is also made by me the great ehhee;) it ves made on the 6th of september, 2005
and it was one of the first 2 poems that i had made....the other one was "IT HURTS"......that ill rite after some days but first u guys comment on dis one re......dont worry.....
posted by sun at
1:41 AM
5 Comments:
nice nice,,
gr8 poem ..
well done
god bless....me
Mohit
well i think i waz da 1st one at dat time wen u told me da poem..haha n dat time i had told u i luvvvv da endinn....da est of it is kewl too but da end is like i dunno gives me 'great stuff' sorta vibes... i m so lost its not even funny.
hehheh wow meenal.....n thx mohit....thx a llottt.....fer da great comment......
gr8 poem sana..
u shud rite 10 more poems like dis..lol..
tc
Mohit
hehehe yeah i think sumday inshallah i vill reach not 10 but 100 .... dont worry...heheh.....;)
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