.........TILL DEATH DOES US PART..........

ok guys now i feel dat dis is one of my other masterpieces.....i feel........now it depends on u guys how u guys feel bout it.......dis is bout me committing suicide........but hey after reading this poem dont think i am actually thinking of committing suicide.......no veys........no matter vat happens im not gonna leave all u ppl so easily.........so u think so??????.......hehheh........nonono.......jokes apart even if i vouldve been in utter depression i voouldve not thought bout committing suicide cos as it is in every religion......."SUICIDE IS SIN PPL".....EVEN THINKING BOUT IT IS A GRAVE SIN........SO COMITTING IT....JUST IMAGINE........well i ves just thikning ive made poems on love,problems and even passionate stuff so y not try sumthing new like SUICIDE???........so here goes something...........hope u like it guys..........n pls fer god's sakes comment.........

:TILL DEATH DOES US PART:

He entered the room, i had a smile on my face,
he obviosuly knew i was going through a gruesome phase...
There i was lying on my bed,
but with a hole running through my head...
At first he had smiled back with relief,
but then he was taken aback with a lot of grief...
He came closer and felt intense pain,
for he knew he was the reason and any effort would be in vain...
He saw the tears in my eyes,
then held my hand which was cold as ice...
He felt nostalgia surge over him,
he knew the tears where at the brim...
He remembered my words of threat,
and felt like screaming as the guilt inside crept...
I had told him i would die in his love,
he thought it a joke and said he'll be mine when we meet above...
Now that he knew about me and my illness,
i thought he would rather be mine in utter stillness...
I told him i couldn't stay in a world like this,
wherein i would have to wait until our first kiss...
I told him i wa eager to have him now,
and told him to put his hand forward and take a vow...
The vow said that we would stay together,
after we were dead forever and ever...
I told him i'm happy that he played his part,
and said well then till "after death does our journey start"...
And then there was the bang,
he stood there shocked and didn't understand...
The bang was one and it ended it all,
wherein i was the prey of a mysterious poll...
I lay there lifeless on my bed,
he stood there silent staring at my head...
The bullet had pierced through my skull,
which demonstrated that i was in a lull...
It hadn't given me no time to think,
as life was out of me in a blink...
There he stood guilty as ever,
and he said he'll love me FOREVER AND EVER...

so thats it.........temme how the poem is and please comment....................................................................................................